I found your post really interesting. I know nothing about electric shock therapy, so forgive me if I sound naive, but did it actually work? It sounds awful and experimental. I missed the ref to the insulin reaction treatment in the book as I'd not heard of it before. I know you said you'd not seen it in practise, but can you shed any light on it at all? Can anyone else?
When Esther was having the insulin reaction treatment, I thought Plath was implying Esther was pregnant because she'd put on weight!!

(I think Esther made a ref that she looked pg too). Because Esther referred to a baby very early on in the book, I kept looking for clues throughout the remainder of the novel! So I totally missed the thing about the insulin treatment. What am I like!